All Comments on 'My New Secretary'

A good general outline, but I felt the action was a little rushed and much more teasing could have taken place to build up to the first sexual encounter, then more encounters could have been fleshed out (no pun intended) in greater detail. Still, it was a decent story. Thanks.

Could have used a different name other than Danny. Didn't help the flow of the story when you have to reread parts to see whether Daddy or Danny features.