All Comments on 'My New Toy'

It was pretty good until the ending destroyed to whole mood! Put it in the proper category!

The story was short, but well written and has potential. It could easily go into several groups, but it was only a start and certainly requires more chapters and character development. We want to see what happens next, want suggestions? Keep writing.

It is so much fun getting caught. You could easily develop this into a series of stories as somebody else suggested. But it is very good as a stand alone piece too. Loved the twist at the end. Keep writing.

She Is Not Alone or Lonely from Now On! Camilla Is Her Mentor, er, Mistress! More Of This?

Love it. You should totally write more.