All Comments on 'My Next Visit'

very hot story, loving the series so far, keep it up!

LOVED IT she knows how to make the reader feel like he is there experiencing the slutty sex!

Loved your story - the characters seem real, not perfect, and the intensity builds. The mixture of shame and excitement makes it even more arousing. Keep writing!

I would love a nasty girlfriend/wife like you. I would encourage your escapades and clean you up with my tongue when you were through and telling me about it.

I loved the coming out story, feeding that inner fire as it were. Reminded me of an episode of "Bus Stop Tales" where a young girl was seduced as it were fictionally quite exciting to watch that video. That was gosh 1987 or around then, really liked the rememberance your story brought of a fine peice of past porn. Keep on writing, read both submissions very erotic, fresh, sexy. Yahda Yahda I do drone on, please write more.

Darcy84 where did you go? Your stories are brilliant! Please write more!

Both of your stories are so good. If HIV and STDs weren't a reality in this world I would be this girl. The thought of fucking total strangers in a porn shop is so exciting!!! I love watching porn and and so turned on by it and love the idea of being naked in a public place (I have taken my clothes off in a preview booth, but had the door closed and no one saw me) and turning men on with my body. I am not stunning to look at, but I am fairly average. When I am in a porn shop though, all the men notice me and it is so erotic. They clearly want to fuck me and I love to be lusted after by these men. These stories capture that feeling better than anything else I have read here. Your stories are so erotic and well written. I hope you continue writing this type of story. - April

More,please