All Comments on 'My 'Niece' Jerri Ch. 04'

WOW!! That was nice chapter hope you will write the next one soon.

Glad to see that you've continue writing this series. I love this series and am now looking forward to see if you'll write more chapters. Maybe explore Max and Zoey's love life?

please dont let this get crazy. if max and zo hook up ok but leave the parents out of that.

Thank you so much for continuing this series. I love this series with its' mixture of romance and at times graphic sex scenes. More on the way?

After seeing it posted and into the first paragraph I decided to start at the beginning and I'm glad I did. It's a good series and I like the baited hook you left for us at the end.

Just found this series from the "new" tag and am Really impressed! Good writing and great characters. Sure hope you don't limit the "action" just because of ANY pre-conceived ideas of propriety....fortunately THAT does not look like a probability. ;) Let the fun begin!! wd

Great story, guess I'll have to go look up the rest of it.

Seems like a very loving and open family.

I think the kids are going to hook up next, but it's going to kill the story if the parents get involved.

Nice to see you continue this series. So far so great. Nice transition from the parents now to the kids. Let's see if you have more up your sleeves.

I read this story, liked it very much and then had to read the previous chapters. I didn't care for the anal part, but then some do. I look for stories with family incest as they excite me though they have to stay a fantasy. The loving relationship you have built in this family make it seem so real. I would hate to see it turn into a constant family orgy. I am not sure if that is where you are going, but if that is the course, I think it will be difficult to keep the family the same.

a follow up chapter would be welcome. please and thank you.

I think follow up chapters would be great. There are so many senarious that I

think could happen. Do Max and Jerri get together??? Do Zo and Max get

together???? Possibly other get togethers ????? Enjoyed all the chapters

and even got some laughs.. Great writing...................

Would love to see a few more chapters. I'd like to see Max and Zo together with a family of their own. Maybe even the two youngest together in a few years. I don't want to see the parents getting involved with any of the children. I'm a hopeless romantic and like to see couples staying together.

I'd also love to see some follow up chapters especially one where tina comes back and tries for revenge or something.

Beautiful writing and such a lovely story

its a fun story. but it needs a few more chapters. you left us hanging here. Well-written, and clever, just incomplete!