All Comments on 'My 'Niece' Jerri'

I really enjoyed your story. It was more about loving someone and less about incest. The incest was there, but more as a back drop. It is a very nicely told story. I'll be watching your name for your next story.

beautiful love story... i do believe their should be another chapter to this story

You're missing a bit at the start of the story. You have to "paint the scene" in the mind so when Joe comes into "the living room" there is nothing to say that Jerri is lying on the couch and covered in a "pile of blanlet". Where did this pile of blankets appear from? To me she was standing there until it was mentioned. Set the scene up. Otherwise good.

@ photoman001

Read it again. It's explained, where the "pile of blankets" came from... Joe wrapped her in because she was freezing.

@ Chiara23

Really a nice story, I really got curious about your other stories, and promisse to read them, once I have more time to spend on it. I only have two things to complain on:

Couldn't the story - the story, not the sex - be some longer? (Ok... I confess... I wouldn't mind the story AND the sex being longer) It was not only you're writing about fucking, but you also showed their affection, love and commitment... So, if you're going to write another Chapter, I'm looking forward to it and hope, you'll show also some more of their love. The second thing I have to complain about is:

Around in the middle, after the kids had been bathed and put in bed, you lost me for a paragraph or two, because I got confused seeing them run to the masters bedroom, while I thought they are already in bed. (BTW... where have they been, if not in bed?)

I liked the story very much, so I gave five stars.

photoman001

Yes, you caught me. I made a mistake and didn't explain that Joe and Jerri were sitting on the sofa.

Mea Culpa

My deepest apologies.

Chiara

Chiara.

Enjoyed the story but think it should have been under Romance. You need an actual direct blood relationship to have incest. Otherwise an awful lot of people who have married a former spouse's brother or sister would be getting locked up.

Hi northlander,

The title of this group is Incest/Taboo. In Joe's mind it is taboo to have sex with Jerri because he's her "Uncle" in his mind. That would fall under the taboo part of the group. If the heading were just Incest I would have put it under a different heading. Remember incest is a knowing sexual encounter between people who have a blood relationship. Taboo sex is not necessarily between blood relatives, it is merely a forbidden pleasure between people.

Best regards,

Chiara

I'm off to read the next chapter right away

My dick has never been harder

I love this story, and am looking forward to reading your next one ;)

Thanks

Shane

I really love your stories they are very well written and extremely erotic. Keep up the naughty work.

to suit an old romantic. Thanks Chiara. Five stars.

You are such a good writer. The characters and the dialogue are realistic and the slow build was very erotic.

I liked your story, I can identify with uncle Joe being somewhat torn to do what is right but I think most men would take advantage of a nympho niece coming of age. She went from a nice girl to a fucking whore pretty quickly, maybe a little too quick. Of course, it was enough to get this slut (me) off and that was the point, right? Well, not just me but all of the other sex crazed sluts on this site, too. Thanks for the orgasm!

Part 3 pls

dialogue is a little "hickish" but its a clever, well written sexy story. looking forward to reading chapter 2

What is next after ch. 04... Is it continue...

thoroughly enjoyable :)