by MastrStoryTeller
MastrStoryTeller perfectly described the increasingly erotic strokes used to stimulate both a man and a woman during a sensuous massage. Those are the techniques I always used when giving such massages in my 19 years as a Certified Massage Therapist. (I'm retired now and living in Naples, Florida. I still give erotic massages to interested visitors, but I no longer charge for the sessions.) The clients' reactions are also accurately depicted as their arousal increases to the final happy ending.
Even the extensive dialogue in this story adds to, rather than detracts from, the narrative. Other authors would do well to emulate MastrStoryTeller's style, because the unrealistic dialogue in other stories demands a greater suspension of disbelief. I look forward to reading the other chapters in the My Niece Simone series.