All Comments on 'My Night As A Whore'

The way the story reads, I think the author got off by writing her fantasy. Sounds like a hot little chick, that has a very imaginative mind. Thanks for the trip

that was hot!

Stops and starts and tries to contain what should be a novel in short story. Very good but needed more filler. What was the protagonist thinking about. Etc.

There is nothing to recommend here.