by just a thing
Well done....you really created an amazing Lara character.
Just watch MIB II again last night, with Lara as the Alien leader! THIS was what I was imagining as I watched it, you know. :) Well written, except where you left out a word here & there, one excellent story! I actually came B4 I finished p.3 of the tale (er, tail?). Nice writing, fertile imagination! Hence the 5 star rating. Well done, indeed. :D
This was really excellent and in a class of it's own. 5*****
This was an amazing story. I'm not generally an affectionado of being sub, usually Dom, but this would be enough to make me switch for a while. Wonderfully erotic. Thank you for the experience.