All Comments on 'My Night with Sophie'

Very hot story, and very well written. I love the way the pace builds; starts out slow, gradually quickens, and then peaks to a crescendo! Very hot indeed.

What a great story.

Sensual and erotic. Too bad that they were both dominated by size.

All right, let's get the obligatory criticism out of the way: there are a few writing flaws which a good editor should have corrected.

That said, GREAT STORY!!! You present this as being factual. I knew someone just like this. I was coming off an ugly little divorce (okay, that's both a redundancy and an oxymoron), and had a few months worth of weekends with a married woman of the same body shape, and sexual appetite, that you describe. I know what you're talking about! And it is, indeed, an incredible set of memories to keep forever. Don't ever lose contact with that woman, even if it's only to talk about the grandkids. Most people don't have such an opportunity ever happen in their lifetimes.

-- KVK

Talking about how this guy writes about eating pussy would be total a waste of time, when I can show you so easily:

"Her fleshy lips were soft and pliant to the touch and I inhaled the wet warm smell of her sex as I gently massaged her mons. I circled her lips with my tongue, kissing the insides of her thighs and blowing on her open flower. Her hips began to pulsate with my caresses and I circled in closer and closer to her clit, eventually licking in ever so slightly with the tip of my tongue. She moaned and bucked her hips to meet my mouth. I began to lick in a steady groove, using the flat of my tongue to maximize the surface area of my oral assault. She was juicy and ready. As my tongue and lips created a rhythm, I slowly inserted two fingers. They slipped into the slippery channel of her cunt and she moaned with appreciation."

Wow! Thanks for practicing until it was an art form. Encore!

Wild Bill

Haven't returned to this one in a while... how on earth did I let that happen? Yet another example of why my favorite gapster7 story is whichever one I'm reading at the moment... and if you think that sounds familiar, g7, you're right...

Very well written and tells a good story. Kudos to you!!

GymmyT

That he only spent one night with Sophie because this is one of the hottest stories I have ever read!

Lovely premise.

But sex starts too fast. And moves ahead too fast -- needs mant more details, step-by-step-slowly rather than racing ahead to the finish line.

Three stars.

5.0 = 💯% (❤💛💚💙💜) 👍👍!

Great story!! WHAT happened to Sophie