by indy2100
A in love married couple....That's LW...3* MERRY XMAS TO ALL
I think you wore those 5 words out. Maybe a good editor would have helped.
I thought you handled this very well. But there's no one to hate so a lot of readers will be disappointed.
You did a good job with the story line you chose to work with. I hope all who love to read about cheating wives and then bitch, take time to read this one. If so they should be able to see why the stories they bitch about are really the ones that make the reader come back for more.
Thanks again!
I gave you a four without realizing this was your first story. Sorry. When judged as a first story this is a solid 5.
I really enjoyed this one... it was unexpected considering the category. Not precisely what I was looking for, but exceptionally well-written and turned me on in a major way!
Well done!
(And ignore '26thNC'. I've seen comments she's left elsewhere. She's obviously a troll who delights in ridiculing talented writers.)
When my wife asks me to fuck her when we are out and I say no, she almost always succeeds to find another available cock. She knows I don't mind on condition of telling me all the details afterwards. So, regularly I fuck an already creamed pussy ... and I like it.