All Comments on 'My Old Flame'

Please,please,lets have more of this truly lovely story.Its so redolent of old times in my own life.Truly wonderful

Just to reiterate the previous commentator's remarks that this was a lovely story and very stimulating. The seduction scene reminds me of my first time with another girl.I hope that you PLEASE!! take your storyline further with Jack seducing a reluctant Susannah again and possibly her daughter Hannah as well.

While I'd love to see more of the story, it'd be hard to do it as well as you've brought it to this point. The question of Could they really make a go of it would take more than a few pages. The change for Susannah would be incredible - and trying to get her daughter to give her blessing, etc. It would take a lot of work, but it'd be great to read!

Absolutely loved this story!!!!

Wow emotional 🥲