All Comments on 'My Other Mother Ch. 03'

The story sure took that fabled left turn in this chapter.

Somewhat a bit discontented, and perhaps a bit wandering. The story is becoming complicated.

Since he has been tit fucked by his mom, and he is confused about his feelings of making love to his mother, he really isn't up to fucking her pussy yet.

He's still too immature to make love to a woman that's as experienced as his mom.

The boy needs to grow up and become the man his mom needs him to be.

Quite the turn of events indeed. Joe turned out to be quite the shitty guy, but it always seems tha mom has something up her sleeve, and she promises retribution, hehe. The sex scene was hot, even when it was tainted by Joe's influence. I expect much more hotness to come between Kathleen and Steve, with the son hopefully stepping up his game and showing his worth. Once he goes past his hangups, he has the potential to truly become the man his mothers wants, needs and desires. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the good work! ^__^

Isn't he suppose to stop before things got way out of hand? That is what he concluded when he was talking to himself. He said alcohol made his mother do things yet he's allowing her and himself to drink. Just asking.

This sucks...you are one strange person.....get a life, or at least get laid....40 year old virgin...lol

Didn't see that coming what a bastard Joe is but being controlled by the manipulating Kathleen, what a good boy Steven is for mommy

sorry but u fucked up the titfucking part.. what a shame :(

1/5

All I have to say is that you constructed this story so well. There's nothing I can add, and the fact that I noticed there are eight chapters leads me to the conclusion of doubt that I wont finish the story before going crazy myself.

If I should be aroused or creeped out by this split personality thing ... but its an interesting story you spin either way.

...but I hope Steve doesn't become a pussy.

Obeying his mother is one thing but he still needs to stop acting like a frightened little boy around her.

Why would she find that weakness attractive?

but i just can't.

You completely ruined this story .All sensual ,romantic ,sex moments must be shared between Mother and son only .no third party . I hate when people treat mothers as whore in their story . Close encounter of mother and son smooching etc were awesome ,as I was waiting for their first sexual encounter ,you come up with this shit .

Won't read the other parts.

Who are you to tell me how I 'must' write? How self important of you.

That was brutally hot. Reading your work for the first time and I'm really enjoying it. Very interested in seeing where this goes and the cross-over that I see is coming. Really good character buildup.

It must be almost impossible for the son to psychologically, emotionally and physically adapt to his mother's actions. The mother's comments about the son's martial arts training must solidify his concept of his mother's personalities. The hair pulling activity could only reaffirm his possible fear of his mother's altered personality. Finally, at no point has the author failed to further develop his characters nor ldets there appear to be a crack in the logical development of the plot/subplots.