All Comments on 'My Other Mother Ch. 05'

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 12 years ago
The boy is still a wimp

His mother has told him what she wants him to do to her, in fact she has told him twice that she wants to be bound, raped and used.

The only thing is, he is still not mature or man enough to handle a hot sexy woman like his mother.

I hope that the boy grows up soon.

MrLurkerMrLurkerover 12 years ago

I'm not sure any man is man enough for

this dual personality chic.

Doing her would be like trying to fuck a tornado....

YamiBoyYamiBoyover 12 years ago
^__^

Quite the eventful chapter. I prefered the first part because it brought us more hindsight about the charaters, plus the dialogues and the teasings were very good. The second part was very hot, albeit somehow tainted by Joe's influence. I hope Kathleen gets her revenge and the pig gets what he deserves. Now that Steve's is becoming more conscious of the whole picture, I guess he will certainly step up and give his mother what she wants, and get what she is willing to give. I'm looking forward to tomorrow's part. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the awesome work. ^__^

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Just some pointers. Aren't they suppose to be looking for jobs? Yet they seem to be doing everything but looking for jobs. Another is that the mother did ask him to stop her if things get too far, yet the mom is giving him alcohol and she herself is drinking.

L.A. WickerL.A. Wickerover 12 years ago
Yeah...

Come on, I love being teased, but shit, get on with it!

chimpeechimpeeover 12 years ago
SLOW BURNING

Good timing what goes around cums around and Joe and Roxie can't see whats coming is it time for the pastor to show her face and i'm sure Shiela could be lurking round the corner what a combination that might or will be

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Just fine the way it is

Your painfully slow and detailed character development is a LOT of fun! PLEASE keep writing exactly the way you have been!!!!!!! Your unique style can be captivating.

MasterDarkWolf1103MasterDarkWolf1103over 12 years ago
Don't know how you managed it but

this series is a little extra-twisted and oh so hot at the same time. The characters are multi-faceted and feel real. A little mystery, a little teasing and a little psychology all combined make for some really interesting reading. WAY better than the same-old stuff all over the site. I actually get a little emotionally involved wiht the story. I can't wait for the chapter where he ties mom up and dominates her the way she really wants. Bring it on! Great job!

mart43ukmart43ukover 12 years ago
love the slow pace

Awesome.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Fantastic

This is an absolutely fantastic story.

thegreat101thegreat101almost 2 years ago

What were those complex character settings and backstory for in the end? After all, the son is just an asshole to masturbate to watching his mother have sex with Joe or a passing dog. It turns out that the writer is just the same guy as his son, like most trash on this site. Just write it like a 10-year-old's writing, don't pretend it's complicated, have a story, or at least be consistent. write it like this Son has sex with mom Sex with a passing woman Sex with a female pastor Sex with joe We are soulless sex bugs the end

thegreat101thegreat101almost 2 years ago

The more I think about it, the more angry I get. I want to catch the fucking shit who wrote this article and cut off the skull and intestines with a chainsaw while still alive

Foxterot7aFoxterot7a9 months ago

I am enthraled with this story. Mother and son both realize and accept the fact that the mother can not love, trust, feel the safety and security with anyone but her son. Only he can and will provide her with the emotional, physical and psychological well being that she needs and craves. As he matures and learns about their respective needs and wants, he will come to realize only she can willingly and unconditionally meet his needs without conditions.

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