All Comments on 'My Other Mother Ch. 07'

and the foreshadowing is coming through as well.

Really enjoyed this even though there wasn't much action. Was actually kind of creepy with the grandmother, nice job.

Very intense chapter with the exhibitionist reply and most importantly, Steven's visit to his grandmother. The visit took a very spooky turn (as expected) and it all showed that Steven has a few reasons for getting worried. All in all, another eventful chapter that was a fantastic read. Keep the chapters coming! Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the great work. ^__^

The grandmother was creepy and I hope Steven tells his mum that he visited his grandmother in the next chapter.

Loved it!

This story is good, but getting rather dark and somewhat weird. Still....5-star, so far.

He may not be wrapped to tightly himself.

It seems he may be the one that's having delusions, and thinks it's his mother that is the one that has dual personality problems.

It's still a shame that he hasn't fucked his mom yet, and I'm still holding out until he does.

This chapter is a little on the dark side, but very good.

Thanks for the read.

The old stories and words no longer fit so we built new ones like jedi and sith.

He has been talking to another self for awhile now without questioning it. Talking to yourself is one thing, having back and forth conversations is another all together. Clearly the bloodline here is a wee bit wonky and I would not be suprised to find out the occurrences of incest and inbreeding go way back in this family coupled with the darkness. Funny too how he looks like his grandfather who one of the sisters, (are we sure which one?), seduced.

..........in this Family.

An interesting story with its erotic elements but a depth of content rarely attained.

Schizophrenia is an interesting and highly complex subject, far more complex than many understand or can comprehend.Personal experience with someone dear to me showed me my own limits of both.

I look forward to more...........well done so far!

Talking to yourself isn't so bad. Arguing with yourself is a problem. Losing arguments with yourself is a serious problem.

You should have left the other woman out of it and left the kid and mom on their own!

Now a bit of the dark side whats happened to the Pastor and is she Sheila or is Sheila going to come into this super spicy stoty

This is getting very very interesting and the incest factor is not the one making it so. Tim Burton would be proud of you.

I echo Clark3001's sentiments, this has started out well and gotten better, please don't let it slide... as so many have done in the recent past.

When you threw Roxie in the mix I thought this had turned into another formulaic "mom's a happy slut and loves to share her son" incest story. But I am cautiously optimistic that this story has developed beyond that. Very interesting.

I'm just now reading this story, and there seems to be something missing between the end of Chapter 06 (Page 4) and the beginning of Chapter 07. 07 starts out in a cellar, with eight men halfway across it, digging towards our hero, whereas there was NO MENTION of the cellar, nor of said digging men, in Chapter 06.

Whahoppen?

-Rei

If the author can keep up the quality of his/her effort this story represents, I hope he/she tries for a novel.