All Comments on 'My Own Country Boy'

This was a great story. Loved your writing and the characters. You should definitely consider adding more parts to this. It could be a lovely chapter story. Much potential here. Thanks.

I hope you venture into more with this story!

I liked it alot but it somehow left me unsatisfied. Maybe it was the way it ended so suddenly. Good story though. Keep writing.

wrapped up in the characters, great verbal foreplay, and then just the quick "in & out" of the sex scene at the end?! no, no, no!

i can tell you can do so much more with a story, so get to it camogirl88! ; )

I agree with the other comments....there is more to be told here. Do sexy Bo and erin go on to marry and raise children? Sexy Bo is such a kind gentleman, but rugged when it is necessary. I'd imagine Bo with a good coating of hair for that sexy chest and abs. Please write more!

Bo and Erin deserve more of their story to be told. I imagine sexy Bo laying naked in bed with Erin, while she caresses his chest, then licks the sexy hair on his manly chest and abs. Keep them loving, and give them a wedding and babies for the ranch. Great loving story!

Great story shame it wasn’t longer