All Comments on 'My Own Heaven Ch. 05'

Unlike so many long stories I read on the internet, with this one I have not been disappointed so far. (Too many of them eventually degenerate into smut, and I realize I've wasted time on them.) The exciting situation and good writing continues here! Jean K.

This chapter is a tease, but it keeps up the tension and demonstrates the affection between Keith and Heather.

Consistently good writing. Thank you!