by Miguel59
i see where this is going. well the first chapter was pretty harmless but thats as far as i go.
sorry i can't vote on this.
i really don't like willing cuckold stories, seems this is heading there.
those stories i believe should be in the gay male section.
Great start, good characters, could be a strong story which would be welcomed.
The burn the bitch lovers get up early to make hate on any story that does not make a woman into a crying, please help me I wont do it again story.
get up early too, so they can foam at the mouth anticipating their favorite "watch my wife get fucked" stories
The final sentence indicates that this is just another repressed homosexual fantasy. Unfortunate.
After all what kind of man climaxes thinking about the woman he loves being fucked by another man?
Is that last sentence what makes this a great story Bonnie? You're as fucked up as all the cuckolds that praise this kind of crap. ONE STAR
the last sentence said it all. Nothing further needs to be said about it. 1*
His age is a concern. If he's in Grad school he's over 22. Graduate High School at 18, 4 years in college then Grad School. So he's older than the story portrays him to be. And Managers don't tell young trainees what underwear they should use unless they want a sexual harrassement lawsuit in their laps. We'll see where this goes. Given your previous story history I hope you don't make him into a sniveling wimp. She's 6' tall. I see the potential for this to go in a bad direction. Don't do it. You'll get bombed.