All Comments on 'My Personal Tutor'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Well done

A nice and straghtforward story. I always enjoy 'mature' stories, but as I get older myself I realise I have to make adjustments. 31 would be very young in my eyes! Good luck with future stories.

changuchanguabout 17 years ago
Great first start!

That was good and inspires me to submit my own first story. Got a little lost on the grammar, but again it was a very good ride.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
childish

must have different grammar rules in britain.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
not bad

Hey "childish"..no they have the same rules that we have in America...you just dont understand them..go back to sucking dicks..you probably are pretty good at doing that...grammer...not so hot

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Sweet

that was a great story can't wait for more

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