by M J Lindsay
Absolutely the best story I've read here. Hot, romantic, touching - what more can I say?
Started reading to find some hot frat action, but got a lot more out of it. Sexy, sweet... I'm one happy lady and I only hope I can find a guy like one of them (only straight ;) ).
I love these stories!! The emotion and connection in the stroies you write is wonderful! The sex isn't too bad either! Keep up the Great work.
I loved this story. I was looking for some bedtime reading and this put a smile on my face. I thought it was sweet that Steve fell for Brian before he met him, that lust turned to love when he helped the grieving boy. Brian was cute also; not knowing just hoping that he was right and his phantom was Mr. Wonderful. This story was full of sap, but sometimes we need to be reminded that "love walks in on danity cat feet."
oh just when I thought the only one in Literotica that can write really good gay love stories is DW Simon, I stumble across your story :) thank you so much for sharing.
i thought it was greatt! .. id love to read this story from steve's perspective :)
This is a wonderful tale of RED HOT SEX growing into stable long-term true love. Each lover begins adulthood with a tragedy, but blossoms into joy in the waiting arms of the other. Both lead lives of generosity toward all -- excellent careers and a homelife to admire. Fine, fine thought & writing! Thank you!
That was absolutely amazing, i don't comment much and i haven't even checked to see how old this story is but i have to say i loved it :)
Beautiful, you created characters fast so by the time they hookd up at the ski lodge I was already totally in love and delighted they got together! The lovemaking scenes could have been more developed but they were still totally hot and the ending was perfect.
This was a great story and the two lead characters were very sweet. One thing that seemed very out of character was Steve being a rampant man whore as a late teenager - saying he slept with any male human he found. That does not at all jive with the way his character and qualities were presented and I did not care for it at all. It seemed like a very insignificant throwaway tidbit in the rest of the story so I can’t imagine why it was included that way. Sure he could have had some pervious lovers but to make him a very promiscuous slut for several years did not sit well.