All Comments on 'My Place in the World'

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Anonymousalmost 6 years ago

I would like you to continue...

so far...so good!

I would love to see where this is going...

LarryToLaura almost 6 years agoAuthor

First time writing...

This is my first time writing any type of story. Constructive criticism is encouraged. Hope you like it...

shogunmaximus almost 6 years ago

More please NOW

This was good but such a tease want to read more

Anonymousalmost 6 years ago

Wow!

Good start it seems like! Please the next chapter asap :D

LarryToLaura over 5 years agoAuthor

I'm restarting

I was displeased with this first attempt at writing. I am restarting this story with a story I just submitted called Finding My Place. If you want to know where this was leading, look there.

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Bi dude married to an amazing wife. I enjoy dominating her or the other way around. I’ve always had fantasies of strong, more masculine men taking control of me and bending me to their will. I would never give up the life I have. But if I could have lived a second time, I woul...

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