by bluedragonauthor
Omg. This is your most enthralling work yet. I've been through it. And its the hevean and hell you described to a T. Your an amazing writer! Write a book and ill buy it! Keep up the AMAZING work!
It's gone past just a jerk off story and has given the characters complex personalities. Awesomely done, can't wait for Chapter 3, being a romantic sap, I hope he and Coutrney get together.
This is sorta Kinda-Sorta-Maybe Nerd-Boy all over again, isn't it?
The first page is one of the best... I wish more of your stories involved this kind of partner swapping and teasing and soft swinging etc..
Aw jesus christ! What a fucking pussy. Hard to say wether his balls or his brains are smaller, though they're both vieing for that walnut size award. I know it was fucking hot while they were together, it is time to move on. Coutney is a total bitch for stringing him along, and he is a complete asshole for doing Anna like he is. Grow the fuck up!
Just sayin.