All Comments on 'My Punishment'

Not enough information. Why would she allow his behavior? Good girl my ass. What an abusive prick. Kick him in the balls and leave him. Never go back. Nothing clever or original about this mass. No stars.

This is not worth reading.

This story really turned me on! However, there were quite a few typos. With a bit of editing, it would have been excellent.

Not sure why two of these commenters are so rude. This is a short hot scene. The back story and the nature of the relationship is not explained explicitly but merely implied so as to waste no time in getting to the sexy stuff. I hope the author keeps writing and that those other two people work on their reading comprehension and constructive critisism skills.

I thought it was great. It got to the point quickly instead of rambling on forever, and I like that :)

She wrote a story and it was based on one of their encounters. You say nothing about her stories being expected to be an accurate report. He like her past efforts, now out of the blue there is fault? Punishment for made up or set up errors is never a good thing to me. Had you created a legitimate set up, the scene could have been something.

Good story, short and to the point.