All Comments on 'My Real First Time'

Sorry, but that was unreadable

You have to be 18, supposedly, to enter Literotica but evidently a 6 year old can submit a story and it will be published.h

I enjoyed the back story and how realistic it was compared to a fantasy based story.

Keep writing :)

It's really awful when we get so old and jaded that we can't remember our first time or feel obligated to express our frustrations with someone who does. While the literary geniuses may criticize your naive approach and manner I applaud the fact that you were able to express it so genuinely. Try again!!!