All Comments on 'My Regretful Wish... Come True'

should have been rejected for good....complete trash

Thank you anonymous. So this tells me that you will not read the next five chapters.

This chapter is a great start! It takes a lot of bravery to put yourself out there, and I appreciate your contribution. Once Anonymous stops hiding and shows their list of published works, we'll see if they have any right to judge so harshly. Even then, Anonymous, your feedback is not constructive.

I, for one, am anxious to read the next chapter!

Thank you for your kind words. I have finally popped my cherry and submitted a small piece of all my work. But any worthwhile story is just like making love. It's a slow build, not a hit it and quit it.

I enjoyed the read, and look forward to seeing a continued story! I think it's got some real potential if you carry it on.