All Comments on 'My Search for a Father'

by JBEdwards

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Sex? Sure.

Erotic? Not really.

CadillacRoseCadillacRoseover 6 years ago
Good Set up - enjoyed it!

I enjoyed your protagonist's point of view and her almost detached telling of the encounter. It was a subtle read for the sex, but kept my interest very much. I was rooting for her and her plans to check off as many hookup bars as she can while searching for her baby-daddy.... :- )

KingCuddleKingCuddlealmost 4 years ago
If you're serious about this...?

Come on down to Music City for a long weekend..

Or two weeks?

We can sequester together.

I only go out to the small neighborhood market...once a week...

...when it opens at 6:30 a.m..

Welllll...What is holding us back?

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