All Comments on 'My Second Piece of Ass Ch. 33'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
wrap up

I loved the entire series but, great ending!!

Landrious1Landrious1about 19 years ago
Ssad but fitting ending.

I like that the ending celebrated her life and that They were able to remain so close to the end.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Excellent

I had not read much of this series, but once I read the epilogue, I felt I had to read the entire piece. Well done. Took me two days, but well worth it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Great stories!

Your writing is excellent, and I've really enjoyed the stories. It has taken me several days, but they were worth returning to. You have me hooked.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Wonderful story from start to finish

The stories were great very well written. I cried at the end when Laura passed away. BRAVO BRAVO

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
A confirmation

A confirmation of the ideal that erotica is more about the story, not just insertion and ejaculation. A well writen series that dragged a bit in the middle but ultimatly delivered in the end.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Thank you

This was a great story, i was glued to this screen from start to finish , i looked and see you spent 14 months doing this and i`m so thankfull for the effort, nathan , great work and thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Wow!

Not at all what I thought it was going to be, I still read all 33 parts of this story! Took up lots of time but it was a fascinating story & I really enjoyed it as it was no "wham bam, thank you ma'am" type of story. Thanks for the effort taken in weaving a gripping tale, I hope you will have success with your writing.

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