All Comments on 'My Secret Lover Ch. 04'

You really need to finish this store I just hope it ends really well on a good note

I promise I will finish this story along with my other stories. I don't believe in leaving stories unfinished

Thanks for the support and happy reading

Every chapter, is spectacular. Elizabeth is an adoreable pleasure to read about as a protagonist, and even when bad things occur in the narrative, the upbeat tone and Elizabeths cuteness manage to keep everything so happy, I have a feeling I'm wearing a goofy smile whilst reading from start to finish. I've said it before but this really is a daddy dom and little relationship done right ^_^

As to this chapter inparticular, well where to start, we get to see that Elizabeth has at least one more confindant which is nice to see and expands the cast logically. We get at least some comuppance for Derrick wich was cathartic after all the trouble he's caused (plus he's a creeper), though I have a feeling that won't be the last we see of him. Elizabeths dad is playing dirty but Gabriel is the perfect mix of sweet but strict problem solving that a little like Elizabeth needs to keep her on track.

Amazing work, good luck with writing and keep it up :D

5/5 stars

It's been a while since I found a story that I enjoy, and I really enjoy this one! Gabriel is so caring and protective but also possessive and rough all the same time...HOT! I love him and Elizabeth makes this story so fun and exciting! Lol im really feeling this dd/lg thing. Thank you so much! I can't wait for the next chapter!💕

Thanks for the kind words and I loved your breakdown of this chapter. Very insightful and very correct :).

Thanks for the ongoing support and happy reading !

I am so happy to hear you are starting to like the DD/lg community. As a little myself I want people to be able to understand this type of relationship in entirety and hopefully they accept it just as you have :). I am writing the next chapter as we speak, on updates of when stories will be posted you can follow my Twitter @fairytalebaby1.

Thank You for your support and happy reading!

fairy:)) your stories bring out all love's luxuries!! :)) and their bonding facing a challenge? wow!!:)) as good as it gets....the daddy n his little's tale!! :))

Don't often read DD/lg stories, but I am really enjoying this story (as well as your others) You write really well - and with such excitement and enthusiasm I can just visualise, as well as feel your excitement. Your DD sounds so loving and caring, it's no wonder you literally jump for joy! Thank you for sharing your stories - each chapter of which has got 5* from me.

Jules

Thank you so much for your kind words :). I have made your comment comment of the week! You can check it out @fairytalebaby1 on Twitter. On there I also update when new chapters will be posted so you'll never have to guess.

Thanks for your ongoing support and happy reading!

I am a firm believer that the best bonding is done in times of distress. I am glad you saw that through the bad they both prevailed together growing stronger :). Hope you enjoy rhe next few chapters, who knows what turmoil they'll encounter next !

As always happy reading

Do you plan to publish an ending to this series?? I really have enjoyed reading it.