All Comments on 'My Secret Place Ch. 01'

Yes, a hot looking sister and brother who want each other. His sister planned to do him on this secluded trip. Hopefully, they'll both want to screw each other every chance they get and maybe his sister will want to suck him off as much as he might want to eat her too? Hopefully, they can get away from home more and more and take each other hot, hard and often. Maybe oral sex at home in between times. Please, we need another HOT chapter or two. Some added physical details would be great.

In their 20s and still asking Dad to stay out late? Not bad overall

When you live in your parents home you do indeed ask for permission to exceed the house limits even after you pass the age of 18 - or at least you do in my polite world. Maybe not in yours, depending on whether you were brought up or dragged up of course. Thank you for your uncalled-for one star rating, by the way.

The rest of the story is already written - all there is left to do is to cast a final critical eye over everything and then post each chapter in turn. Chapter 2 is with Literotica right now - chapter 3 will follow in a couple more days.

I may just add a few little extra touches here and there to the last two chapters but that won't delay things, I promise.

Thanks Chris. I'm looking forward to the other 2 chapters.

Please keep up the good work. 5*

Looking forward to more great reading to come. Thanks

Chris is right. I returned home on leave as a naval officer & was told here are the car keys be home by midnight & no drinking.

Thank you. And about people rating one star... I have this trouble in the section where I post. Lit should not calculate average but median. Anyway, thanks for the nice story 5*

This is not a one-star story. Neither is it a five-star story. For me to throw a five, the story would need to be superb. This one is very good. There would definitely have to be zero basic grammar/spelling errors. This had a couple.

Great work, thank you. I'll definitely read another chapter.

I would give much more than 5 stars if were possible. I can't wait to read the next chapters. BTW, Mr. Hawk is way off base here. One star? Seriously? Get a new hobby, Mr.Hawk. One that you are more adept at appreciating and judging.

And the eagerness combined with reluctance was very effective.

Sharon was rather bold with her step by step seduction of Chris. The moment she decided to go along on his fishing trip she initiated her plan. He became her protector and confidant. Mum and dad placed her in his care. Her tone changed. She focused on him and his interests. It was not by accident her toy was on display, as was she, as they retired for the night. And being caught in the act the next morning was a powerful way to plant an image and set the mood for the day.

And it all worked.

A job done well.

: D

I think he found her secret place

You never stop being a parent.

When the family gathers for a Holiday it is always the same. The parents slip right back in the role. How was your trip? Do you need anything? Where are you going? When will you be back? Call me when you get home so I know you arrived safely.

If adult children still live "at home" it is a common courtesy to acknowledge a fact of life, even though all parties may be of age, they are not roomies sharing a house.

with the woman in charge and the guy is dolt in England.

Makes me wish my sister would go camping with me again even though we are both in our 50’s.