All Comments on 'My Secretary Ch. 03'

I've read this crap and can't believe the arrogance of the writer that they can carry on cheating for so long without their spouses finding out and whats worse that the spouses have benefitted from it.No matter how old you are your still can get your skany arse chucked out on the streets.Love your spouses indeed .. what bullshit

I don't know why some people get upset about this kind of story, I thought that was what this site was all about. If you don't like it why come here?

I thought it was great, very interesting twist on the intro, collapsed building???

Very hot, and interesting that is is still going on for 15-20 years.

I stumbled on to the 1st part of this story and have been trying to read all others from him. These stories are great. You Go Man!!!

but I agree with the NZ poster.

Well told load of unbelieveable bullshit.

Surely you are correct - cheating must be okay if you fuck your spouse more??

If that theory ain't twisted, then a pigs prick is straight!

NZ and Goodwifey are you real? All these are works of fiction. However, read the papers. There's allways a place where the must outrageous things happened or are about to

Comment below (ANONYMOUSLY!!) from big ole Texass says:

"NZ and Goodwifey are you real? All these are works of fiction."

Well, bugger me - I never did read the front page of the site where it says:

"Welcome to literotica, your FREE source for the hottest in erotic fiction and fantasy."

Fiction and fantasy have to have some footing in reality to be believeable.

Oh shit, I forgot - I should read the papers 'cause all that is real.

Great Stuff,

I am in my 4th year.

The other negative people need to get laid.

Mira que la gente comen mierda.

Hi Hun! It's Mistress Demetra again! I can't stop reading all of your stories! They are so hot! Some people that leave messages should be shot! I love my man dearly, but relationships outside the home are wonderful as well. My man and I have had many threesomes where I have had him and another man and we have also had him and another woman. I loved watching him do everything to her. It was so hot. We had some of the best sex after all of those times. And we have even better sex when one of us comes home from having an "affair". So if people have problems with sex, maybe they are reading stories on the wrong site. Why don't they try one of the sites for christian savior stories. I want to hear more from ya leo! Kisses!

Love, Mistress Demetra

Mr Davis:

Finally, I have finished with all your writings here. After reading for a few months, I have to say, that I have enjoyed your approach and your imagination the most.

Definitely, you are the hero in your stories, but not to the harm or shame of the lady.

Truely, Very enjoyable. I hope you write more, and soon. Keep up the great efforts.

Regards,

-Pultoy

Dear Leo. Yet another well researched & well balanced story, you portray , the couples longing & yearning for each other without it

reading banal or vulgar, having their near death experience,I think

they should applauded. and why oh why didn't they produce a child. Personally I wouldn't put too much store to the whingers & so called goody goodies, if they dont like the presentation of these stories especially on a designated Porn site. Hard cheese, let them go and Piss up their Kilt

Love Jem

I found your story by accident while browsing the site, very very well written, a compelling story that kept me enthralled the whole 3 chapters.

Also very true to life, its amazing how many people have lovers as well as wives/husbands and most of the time the partner wouldnt have a clue

To those that think it couldnt happen in real life.. lol well they must be so naive...lol

anyway, well done again,

sy

I've read all thru Ch.3 Great stuff, I've been down that road and know it's plausible.

1 of the best stories I have read,I loved it!I wish that I could be so lucky,lol, In my marriage!!!Keep up the great writing!!!!!!!!

You drove in another home run with this tale. There are people who can resist and carry on a laision for a long time with out getting caught. Please just keep writing. I am glad to see I am not the only one writing about your work in 2006

they continued to shit all over their spouses, and we as the audience are supposed to applaud them for it? We're really supposed to rejoice in their selfish sexual addiction, believing there are no consequences for it? Now that's bullshit! It would've been better it you had done a quick bang story, but you actually tried to infuse this one (as all your others) with some heart. You have all the talent in the world, but it's a very corrupt, dark, and base heart that pumps the blood into this tale. This is far from "Mature" it should be placed in a whole new section, the characters you craft aren't even whole people, just overgrown (and overused) sex organs!! Their dialogue is nauseating, anything but loving and respectful, so stop trying to make them heroes for succumbing to their sexual urges. They are selfish, immature, and cold-hearted. Even when given a chance to get some help (in chapter 1 with the counselor at the hospital) they continued to act like animals. That's when you had a chance to make them into real, whole characters, but you lazily decided it would be better to let them go on in their despicable self-serving fashion. You could have at least had them seek help, but be overcome by their feelings. Let's not forget that these were not teenagers, but adults in the later stages of life. They seemed brain dead...actually, "brain relocated"-to their nether regions. Neither of them even mentions their spouses unless it's to pat themselves on the back for introducing them to the exciting world of sloppy-seconds sex! I will give you some points for good writing, since that is what brought me back to read the rest of this story, but it's not enough to save this badly concieved tale.

Every loser, every person with no morals,every fool would find this to be a good story unless it happen to them.

... to block pain and relieve stress. And the sexy parts were wrapped in a natural storyline, continuing over a long period of time. A few typos here and there, but nothing too distracting. The kindness of your principals, and the grace of your tale, remind me a lot of the play (and movie) called "Same Time, Next Year".

Thanking you for fine story !!!!!

There were a few erecting part's but you should really put some spark's into it ?

you should put some attraction in to the story

sexy item, sex life into karen / lori's too ,

it only show you & karen !!!

you putaway the part of karen sex life & lori sex life

anyway thanks

yow

I don't know about the others but i can't give this story even an average rating. A story that publishes the thought that even though you love your spouses you can still believe that cheating on them for on and on is okay, is in my opinion fit for those people who marry for just the sex. Its not love, nope!! not even a trace of it!! someone else here said - 'well told tale of bullshit' this correctly surmises the essence of this story.

Someone else said this is fiction. Yeah, so ?? The characters are still human right? The situations can be made up, the characters can be dumb, smart, ugly, handsome whatever you want them to be but to say that they still loved their respective spouses, well that made them inhabitants of some other planet. No human can be so insane. Sorry, but i give this just a one.!

That is sooo hot and nasty! Fun reading. Thanks, Leo. Cheers!

No wonder this shit writer no longer defecate its drivel. 1* !!

That was a HOT story and quite intriguing plot. Under the circumstances it MAY be possible to happen whilst buried under rubble, but doubtful. The trysts afterward were off the scale. Something or someone would have given them away. Then - BTB! Cheers!

Hot story I give it a 4 on the Budweiser Scale !!!

Sure it's fantasy, but it's fun to read and dream about. So it is unreal and maybe unlikely, but I enjoyed it anyway.

detroitdave

I know that this is a strange criticism of a Literotica story, but I thought that it contained too much sex. The basic story - about a long term, slow burn affair - was very good, and it should have concentrated more on character development and the various scenarios about how they pursued their affair over the years without being discovered. Instead the story descended into farce at times, especially when they hid under each others desks fingering and licking - as if no-one would notice! I gave it 5 stars, but it is not as good as 'Grade Whore' by the same author. However, I stuck with it to the end which (for me) is a good sign.