by o2baPrince
"seeing another man's cock..."
This non sequitur misses. What other man's cock? Is he in the room? Is she married? There's nothing to suggest she may have seen another man's cock.
Having seen porn doesn't fulfill the objective.
Did you leave a detail out at the beginning because you said in the story" she was excited at seeing another man's cock.." or did you use the word 'dick"? Well anyway it's not clear if she had been married young but freshly divorced and only saw his cock or was she married and yours was the only one she saw besides her husband? Or she had only been with one guy? It's a detail that helps explain why she was so excited. Other than that I like it. Well told, seemed very personal and it didn't go on and on. Write another!!!!