All Comments on 'My Senior Prom'

There is no drama and no enthusiasm in your writing style

you might want to take a few English classes before you write your next story. your grammar is TERRIBLE. you write like people talk in a ghetto or people who have only spoken English for a short time. learn the language before you try again.

O, SWEETY! I received many negative and insulting

comments to MY first efforts, 'CHIN UP'; they'll

eat their words in a few months once you polish

things up a bit...

Don't sweat the critics, your writing is fun and hot!

Too many adjectives and adverbs. Losen up.

A load of bull. Not written by the person pictured. Not a native English speaker. Probably not even living in the u.s.

Christ almighty. No detail in the sex scenes, all your characters have anorexic measurements, and it sounds like you ran it through Google Translate ten times before you posted it. Try again.

This story is really erotic and hot, but the grammar is really choppy. Other than that, great content.