by OG4U
I hope you will reduce the abuse and show more love and tender affection.
If you read carefully, Talana asked for this. It was Michael who took it a wee bit too far. I think you may like the way I handle this situation in Chapter 03.
Thanks for reading this story and for your comment.
Chapter 03 should be published soon and I'm working on Chapter 04. The bad thing is, I think I'm falling in love with Talana. LOL
Just as was with the first submissive I had who was twenty years older than me, they will tell you of their limits just like she did. In reality even though they are submissive to you, she as you may know is really in charge.
Would like to see you develop what some of her other limits are and push her on those a bit. For example, have her recruit your dad's secretary and present her to you for your enjoyment. There are a plethora of opportunities for you to take that relationship.
Looking forward to chapter 3 and beyond!
I'm not quite sure exactly which direction I'll take with this story. I'm going rather slowly with this in order to take "the pulse" of the readers. I have enough experience in the "lifestyle" to understand subs often attempt to "top" so I do get your drift.
My girlfriend and I love this story and she can't wait to see what happens next. I've never known her to be so wet after reading a story!!!!k don't stop writing now !!l!
WOW! I'm overwhelmed! Tell your girlfriend I am thrilled by her reaction to my story. Damn! I'm totally aroused just thinking about that!
Chapter 03 should be online in a few days. Still writing Chapter 04.