All Comments on 'My Sexual Awakening'

would love to read more chapters

amazed that there ios so little comment. I look for and devour anything that resembles a womans take on her own sexuality. And I think your experience (up to the point where you met your lover) is very very common.

Great that you could get out of that realtionship and become free, would like to hear more

Enjoyed it, hope to see more, thanks.

Yes, I too would love to hear more from you. Nicely written and described.

I rated your story high because of it held my attention through to the end and it sounded reasonably realistic.

You may, however, want to think about having someone edit your future stories, as this first one contains way too many spelling and grammer errors.

I loved to read more of your stories regarding your experiences with younger men.

Great story,well done Angel.

I enjoyed reading this story, it seemed like a chronicle of the writers life, rather than a story. Well written and well explained scenes that I could visualize easily. Thanks for the work....Rich

I like real stories, or those that sound as if they could be real, as yours did. I'd love to read more.

feeling too is a wounderful thing

OMG! I love it.

Great narrative and and use of pace.

Vry Very nice, Loved your picture. I like when women add pictures.

Steve

Playman64

brilliant story so very hot and horny. reading this was so very exciting. and so erotic. and awesome story outstanding writing.

You have a bold, honest style. The sex enhances what you write about, it doesn't define it.

Off to read more of your stuff!

that was intense. you either write very convincing fiction or had an amazing experience, either way, thanks for sharing.

spen sterling

Wow!!!!! I usually don't read male-female sex stories, but I really felt myself drawn to this one. When we stop lying to and playing games with ourselves and admit the truth, we can truly move on with a freedom we never before could have even imagined, much less experienced. Congratulations to John for helping you, Angelica, to take this important step in your life.

Really, before the sex scene, I had thought you were quite manipulative, putting on an act with John, just wanting to mess up his relationship with your daughter; however, I now believe that you really didn't know what you were walking into. You had fooled yourself into believing the lie(s), and now you were free!!

Peace,

S.F.

By all means please continue with your writing as I have voted this story a five star, because there was no ten on the voting pole… Maybe I can vote twice… Please let me also thank your daughter for telling you to submit this submission… Thanks

this is a really good story nicely written with all the right verbage where it needs to Keep up the excellent work.

Paul

The coming out of a cougar!

What a great stroy of confused and wanton lust. Awesome writing - can't wait to read more.

Some technical problems, but clearly there was passion in the telling of this story. I was engaged throughout. So nice job. But in what world is 34DD not well endowed?

And from a beautiful woman!

I love true stories, and I believe yours is not fiction. Well written and engaging, honest and insightful.

As they used to say in some old cigarette ad, you've come a long way, Baby! And hopefully have come many times, too.

I'm looking forward to reading more of your adventures, your exploration of life.

You said, "Oh, by the way, if anyone wants to read more of my affair, let me know. I'm anxious to share." If there's more that hasn't been published on Lit, yes, please let me know. I want to hear all the glorious details.

Yes, as someone said, there are a few mis-spellings, but it doesn't detract badly from your story. That person also mentioned your "'grammer" (sic), which of course was mis-spelled.

Gary13

Extraordinarily good! If all the rest of your stories are this good I'll be a very happy man!

Great, hot and well written story. I look forward to more passionate reading...

Ben

Have you any desire to write about a cougar facesitting a daughter's boyfriend/ husband

Good pacing and believable. I'm glad to see you continued to write and am looking forward to reading about more of your relationships. Thanks for sharing your talent.

Now, I really enjoyed that. I somehow believe it's highly likely to have really happened.

I suppose that's the essence of a well written story.

Well done. I will read more of your writing now.

Assumption...is the Mother of Error!

Exceptionally fine narrative drive! From the gut to my core!!

Exceptionally fine narrative drive! From the gut to my core!!

*****Very entertaining story. With a great storyline. Thanks for sharing.

I feel a teenaged mother will find subliminal desires for her daughter’s lover. The mother will feel she is in contention with the daughter for the guy. I found older women who have daughters tend to leer at her offspring suitors. A gentle guy who can read the subtleties can have a tryst with the matron; I have done just that and more. I also liked to give her oral attention.