All Comments on 'My Shameless 6B'

by xxxShySaintxxx

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BigJohn601BigJohn601about 13 years ago
An excellent start with a fine story....

You show a talent for erotic composition and I for one hope you will continue to submit. You could improve the visual imagery with more descriptive sex scenes but you did convey a subtle message. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Use diagalog

I don't read "I you" stories. Didn't even finish the first paragraph.

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