All Comments on 'My Shemale Mother'

Like it so far. Let's see part 2!

A mother with a dick?

Well, it could be.

But it's about as unlikely as YARRACUDA being able to write well!

So hard to read this. Please edit. And Re-edit. And then review what you wrote and edit a final time.

Nice start, but please, get an editor.

Please stop saying for a Indian. About a Indian. It ruins the story you just established their heritage in the beginning that is all you need. And why is it finished before anything happens? You wasted our time reading an unedited. Get some fresh eyes on your story. Cause your English isn't the best.

Be lenient about the author's writing style.

He/she is Indian, so English is not his/her native language.

I'm a French-Canadian whose native language is French.

If you wrote erotica in French, I'd consider your native language before criticizing your writing.

"Anonymous" says:

"Be lenient about the author's writing style.

He/she is Indian, so English is not his/her native language."

My response:

Anonymous, I don't care to be lenient. If he can't post anything better than this or anything readable at all, he shouldn't post anything at all. I don't care what his native language is or what yours is. Either post something that makes sense to most people or just pretend to post. His writing is so bad it gives shit a bad name!

You're a self-obsessed moron. If you don't like Yannacuda's stories, don't read them. Although, you could learn a thing or two from him. You've got quite a grammatically correct collection of horribly painful stories attached to your account. No one cares what a no talent hack like you has to say.

Love the way you described the curvy Shemale mom in this. There are things you could work on, such as wording and structure. But whatI I've read is enough please me.

Thanks for the story.

I really liked your story, please continue.. ignore the negative talk, your writing is fine.. .

next chapter please

Please continue

I won't read anymore of his works.

Even though his work is good I don't like unfinished work.

At the end it says to be continued but it never continues.

This is perhaps the most confusingly written and disjointed story on Literotica. Why write “appa” when you could simply add a letter to make it less confusing? What is with the use of asterisks (f****y) in many words? Then towards the end of the story…. we have sentences strung together….. with the use of dot, dot, dot. The author needs to research writing with particular emphasis on semantics and syntax.