All Comments on 'My Sister Brie Ch. 02'

Live your writing. More, please!!

If she would have caught him cumming into her panties I would have blown my load onto my wifes panties since I'm jerking off with then now!

why can't anyone ever finish a story don't leave us hanging

Hi Brie,

I love your story, please continue

Peter

Really enjoyed your story, and I wish you would continue, and see what develops between the two. Your stories are almost like you experienced something like this. I loved your picture in your bio. Keep it up

Hey Brie20 , loved both chapters, would like to know more about these 2 & see if anything else happens between them. You also look very cute as well in your pic !

The picture in your bio is sexy. I think you should upgrade. If my sister was as hot as you I think I would lose control to.

brie,

Good work. The two voice story is working well. Excellent sister sequence, must be from experience, hey? Don't give up it keeps getting beter as you write.

keep writing. you're doing great!

Brie, I love both chapters of your story! One thing I really like is how you've created two unique voices, one for each of the main characters. When the point of view changes, it really does feel like a different person is speaking. Also, I like how you provide enough detail to keep the story rich, yet don't get bogged down with too much detail. There are a few minor typos here and there but they don't pull me out of the story at all. Please keep writing, and let your imagination run wild! xoxo Fflow

part 2 is hotter than the first, dont stop. keep going with it honey

This continues to be outstanding! Great story and leaves me wanting to read more and there must be more. I have done this too and got caught. OHHH, did you? Tell us more about this hot encounter.