My Sister Jackie Ch. 07

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Mel listened intently with a slight smile on his face as I told him about Jackie and me, our relationship, the constant uncertainty and the serious threat posed by her ex-husband Roger. He asked me about the information that Jackie was holding and I was embarrassed that I couldn't give him many details. Mel nodded a few times as he listened and, as usual, I couldn't tell what Mel was thinking.

"Well," he said. There was a pause just before he stood up. He glanced at me with a friendly smile that masked everything as he put on his leather gloves.

He picked up his walking stick and before he turned to leave said, "I suggest you and Jackie take a weeklong trip somewhere, leave as soon as possible and neither of you should go back home before you leave. Just leave, now!"

"I hear Hawaii is nice this time of year," he said over his shoulder.

I knew Mel was serious and I was greatly relieved. As I walked to my car I just hoped I could convince Jackie to fly to Hawaii looking as she did at that moment—wearing damp tennis shoes and my sweats.

"You've got to trust me on this," I said. "We'll get you new clothes and whatever we need in Hawaii," I promised her. We had less than an hour before the flight and Jackie bought a straw hat in one of the airport stores that covered most of her tangled hair.

Because of her love for me Jackie trusted me and went along with what I'd asked her to do without much question. After take-off and most of the other passengers were asleep I tried to tell her as much as I could about Mel which wasn't much. Just that we had to trust him.

EPIOLOGUE

We stayed an additional romantic week in Hawaii and we both felt as if we were finally free, even though I wasn't totally sure. When we returned to the Mainland Jackie just stayed with me. She never went anywhere near the house where Roger held her.

One day a large box was delivered to my office and it was addressed to Jackie. Inside the box were personal things, photos, jewelry, some clothing but absolutely nothing hinting that Roger ever existed.

Sometime later, out of curiosity, I drove up the coast to the house that Jackie and Roger lived it. It had been heavily damaged by fire and was scheduled for demolition. Out of respect, I knew there was no point trying to ask Mel about it. I never tried.

Eight years later, after some searching quite by accident I learned that at the same time Jackie and I were in Hawaii right after my meeting with Mel, Roger had been committed to a mental institution four the criminally insane. Two years later he died of natural causes.

Our lives have changed for the better. We're unbelievably happy and raising our two adopted babies.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I like stories that are more than just about sex, but about truly great love. I like stories that have happy endings and don’t leave you with questions because of untied loose ends. I like stories about TWO people where it’s not trashed up by bringing parents and/or others into the equation. I’m an incurable romantic (not that I’d ever want to be cured) and place a higher importance on character development and a good plot, than in just sex. I think the best eroticism has to have excellent characters, plot, and writing, and the sex us just the icing on the cake.

You have delivered on all accounts, and if I could give you a rating of a hundred stars, I would. Thank you for writing the kind of story that I live for. Five Stars.

01Timber6701Timber67over 1 year ago

This was a good Series but the ending was way off and felt fast unlike the other chapters ,, it needed more something else for the two of them

unclemerv77unclemerv77over 1 year ago

Romance and happiness, perfect

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
More please

This story has ended well but the characters are rich enough to develop a longer love story.

SAV12SAV12over 4 years ago
A VERY NICE READ....

BUT, WHY DO I GET THE FEELING THE AUTHOR RUSHED THE ENDING. HE COULD HAVE DONE A BETTER JOB. AT LEAST AS GOOD AS CHAPTERS 1-6 AT ANY RATE. THE ONLY GRIPE I HAVE IS THAT YOU TEND TO USE SEX TO CARRY YOUR STORY IN CHAPTERS 1-6. AFTER AWHILE I SKIPPED THE SEX TO GET TO THE STORY. THE STORY WAS VERY GOOD.

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