All Comments on 'My Sister Moves In'

Now the sister's chances of getting remarried have diminished and he's responsible for 2 kids. How do they explain to the kid when it grows up. You went from a 3 to a 1 in hypersync.

But I loved this. Could I share my lover with someone so completely? Probably not but the story was hot and I shot a load to it, so thanks!!!!!

It was a fun story thanks for sharing it.

What a lucky man having 2 hot cunts to fuck

Hope this continues

Another excellent story. Keep up the great writing.

Really solid story. Loved it. The wife was incredibly understanding. I don't think my wife would be if I my SIL divorced and moved in... she is pretty hot with a really nice ass.

Always good to be able to ply two pussies... Five!

Every one of your stories has something to offer - always a good time.

One small note, though, for what it's worth (i.e., FREE!): we've noticed we enjoy your shortest stories the most. It just seems that you do even better with the (more difficult?) shorter form than with the longer form. Just a thought.

...to share.

Sadly, it all came apart when the older one fell in love with a dude she worked with. I could tell something was changing. She wasn't as involved as before and even slept alone several times before coming out to us. With her sister not playing, the younger girl seemed to cool in her sexual interest.

I moved out a week later. Last I heard, they were both shacked up with hubby and trying to get pregnant.

It seems the younger one always wanted what the older one had. The older one was willing to share....after awhile, and they three apparently lived happy together.

I was bummed for over a year. Hey, they were hot and it was more than fun to me.

But, ultimately I was not want they were looking for. I didn't resemble their father....hubby does.

Imagine that!

Thanks, little technical snafus notwithstanding, it was an enjoyable story. A little slow in the pacing towards the inevitable end, but fun, anyway.

Thank you.

Dave is one lucky bastard! I think this is a fantasy most men can relate to - loved the story!

“He already knew all the backstory. Dave and I are very close and I share everything with him.” – I would hope so, I mean he’s ONLY your husband, but still!

I also find it odd that she finds it so special that her husband is so willing to help her family. My in-laws are family, we always do for one another.

When Tina saw the cum on her sister, I thought she was going to lick it off.

This is one lone fuck story. Dave must be a super sperm producer. Well written, some interesting scenes and lots of sex. The threesome wasn't unexpected but the pregnancies were.

The loving wife and perfect husband make 3 with the beautiful sister. There are cults out there doing this. Sorry but both pregnant at the end blew up your story. If Tina made so much more money why did they get pregnant at the same time. When lose of two incomes made no sence. Plus how will they explain this to their families. And Tina could have found a good guy to love with being in this 3way. How do you explain this to you children. Trouble lies ahead. A fantasy .

Had an opportunity similar to this when I was first married. Wife and her screaming horny sister, two sexy girls with monster tits who loved sex. I always suspected that they were eating each other while in was at work. Always booth pleasantly tired when I got home. Me?..nope. Too chicken, and too stupid, nothingbever happened. Dave was far smarter and far luckier. If only. More would be good, but how could you er top this one??

This story caught me completely by surprise. Hot, erotic and very well written.

As husband to a wife with three gorgeous sisters and a hot mom to boot (theirs, not mine) I absolutely loved this story. I can't tell you how many times I've cum thinking about the arrangement in the story. Of course, it'll never happen, but it's still fun to tease my wife with. Hell, she teases me right back about it.

Thanks for a great read!

I will read this one many times.

It's only illegal if he actually marries the sister or tries some tax shenanigans. It's not illegal to live with, and have sex with, whomever you want!

Can't wait to read the next installment.

Please keep along the same lines. Don't go in another direction. Thanks.

Ruined it for me.

Bragging about cheating on the scores always gets a one from me.

None of the good authors around every comment on this writer's stories. I think they'd be too embarrassed. This author is an embarrassment to the site and to other writers. Some people are conspicuous for their silence as much as they are for commenting. Just more shit from a shit writer.

Things like this probably happen more often than many people think.

Keep quiet about it and don't act out in public and who's to know?

And what business of theirs is it really?

People, it's a story.. He didn't say it was true. I thought he did a good job. Would like to see a follow up story.

Hot story scores some points.

Great tail...err tale!

but when I consider the story with swapped genders, to one wife shared by two brothers, it gets real uncomfortable. Maybe that's my insecurity or traditional values, but there is no way this threesome arrangement is preferable to the sister finding her own true and exclusive love. The sister gets promoted, but the wife gets somewhat demoted. And how can you have sexual emotional relationships with two or more people that are completely equal? Not saying it can't be done, and happily. Some people really do win the lottery. But I'm not sure this is a healthy long term life style for anyone.

Thanks for the effort. And thanks for allowing anonymous comments.

anonymous denigraters (?) - especially when it is so clearly unjustified.

Thanks for your time and talent!

Nice writing, with very little pointless detail and nice paragraph length with lots of interchange it created a fast moving and realistic feel. The trucker stuff was a bit unnreal though. Thanks

I liked it, no complaints. But I always find when excessively used, the "fuck me, I'm your slut, etc, etc" stuff adds nothing because it loses its effect the more it's used. I assume it's meant to convey extraordinary arousal, buy it's not so extraordinary when it happens every time they scrump. However, my primary message is "I liked it, thanks"!

I can relate to Dave in that I love my in-law family & would do anything for them. I have SIL-fever and have 3-some fantasies of my wife & I with her sister. So this is right in my wheelhouse.

I enjoyed the back & forth dom relationship of Dave & wife in fantasizing about Tina. I thought him taking a dom position when he finally had them together and demanding their acceptance as his shared fertile sex slaves was great. I thought the writing style of the author provided realism from a make perspective.

If my wife wasn't in the same room watching TV while I read the story I might have rubbed one out!

More SIL stories please.

One of the best stories on here for a long time - nice build up & great ending

Chapter 2?

Another great story from one of my favorite authors on here. I'd love to see more on this series and several of your others as well please keep writing

Damn man you made my cock stiff the entire time and it needs relief now...

@flashgordon562006 - Yes, it's a story; does that mean we shouldn't comment on it?

@Anonymous 07/12/17 Re: "who doesn't comment" - I guess I could be insulted. I'm certainly not a GREAT writer, but some great writers think I'm pretty good, and I'm commenting here!

Thanks for the great work!

I always enjoy your writing. This story is especially hot and I really like the cuckoldress/incestous theme. I have read everything you have written on here and as usual this is a great story for jerking off. Part 2?

Thats your daydream??? Think about more realistic and believable!!!

Err are you aware this is a sexual fantasy website ? Just checking . Pubescent teen dreams belong here . You ? Not so much.

Nothing interesting happened. Okay, so they all got along great, and he fucked both his wife and her sister, and they lived happily ever after, The End. Sorry, just skimmed it because it didn't hold my interest. Perhaps if there had been a plot, or if there had been some conflict, or if something interesting had happened...

Great fantasy, innocent and naughty at the same time. Loved it!

I thoroughly enjoyed this one. You're one of my favorite authors on here. Thank you for your writings.

My situation is slightly different. I live with my husband and his brother. They both fuck me whenever they or I want and we all share the same bed. All of my friends are so jealous that I have two sexy men all to myself.

The story is a little dull and a bit too storybook for my taste. Noone leads that perfect a life, especially in a relationship that complicated. Also watch out for inconsistencies; at one point Dave is referred to as Jack and the bed in their room changes from a king to a queen It's the little things.

Loved this story, really enjoyed the author's writing style and pace. Very sexy.

Imstillfun appears as a most popular author over the last 30 days. 135 people favorited this story. She must be cheating and be a terrible writer.

I, for one, am a huge fan.

That my SILs had some redeeming qualities. My fantasies run the gammit but this one wont come to pass in my world. Great story though and very well written. The pregnancy part came out of the blue and now the shit gets real. It would be interesting to read about the relationship 9 months down the road. I have a feeling the dynamic will evolve when two babies claw their way out. 5*

I like this writer alot, another great story, Very Hot.. 5 Stars.

A comment earlier mentioned 'traditional values'.

Polygamy is very traditional.

It is only modern misinterpretation (possibly intentional?) that makes it seem wrong.

The people who interpret it this way don't even follow what it says themselves either.

This chapter was good, I would like for the sisters to do each other. Thank you for writing.

very well written, and fun to read nice description and sexy, with a touch of imagination.

I loved this scenario and the story. I would love for my wife to have similar feelings for her younger sister so I could fuck them both!

Dave was a lucky man.

Nearest I got to my wife's sister was when we were courting was the three of us were playing monopoly her sister sat opposite,I was playing footsie with her sister under the table I managed to get my bare toe in her knickers and stroked her pussy.

Great story. Erotic and well told. Loved it!

I loved this story which is both beautifully written and builds the intensity to a sexual crescendo which had me cumming in no time. Well done! I am looking forward to reading your other stories. You can find my stories on here which have a BDSM theme but I am wanting to explore more loving wives and incest in my writings too.

Oh Boy! Great story, well told, I need more! Male fantasies unbridled! No one is a sub, no one is a dom. Each is loved and respected and cherished. Too good to be true. But dreaming is great!

The sister that I married, lost her sex drive three minutes after the ink dried on the marriage license.... Then a year later, her two years younger sister was staying with us, we were alone and got to kidding around and somehow my eight inch cock took her cherry and got buried in her SNAPPING pussy for the first four of thousands of hours of the best fucking of my life. That was the day that I discovered that I was married to the wrong sister. That night, I brought her into the bedroom, fucked my wife's sister right next to her and told her that this is her sister's and my bedroom, now. I told her that if she wanted to get laid, to come in and ask but if she fucks anyone else, she and her shit are out the door. I knocked them both up... her sister, first, by four months. My wife's attitude changed... She had competition so she went back to fucking me. She was pretty good again but she didn't have a prayer of competing against her sister's cum gushing supertight milking snapper.

They came into their cottage when they arrived…

*** It had a “king size” bed and a couch

They went swimming, came back, took a shower…

*** he came out to find us hugging naked in the “queen size” bed

Other than this bit of dumbness, you wrote one hell of a story. I gave it five stars because they won't take six.

This is the height of what is noble in human love, you're invited into this most imtimate moment, and you want to be an English teacher? OK, privately offer to do last glitch editing to help prepare him for professional publishing, but recognize beauty when you find it. It's rare. It's wonderful. This is love, in case you didn't know.

Thanks for sharing.

Very enjoyable story of shared loving.

I would have loved this triangle with my sister and my hubby. Lil Sid and I dabbled with a bit of mutual masturbation growing up. That all stopped when I met hubby. Now we are much older, we wish we seduced my husband. Very unlikely now but I do love the dream.

Thank you xx

Great story, had me hard until the end. What a great fantasy and well written story. Beautiful. Hot. Sexy. It had it all... well done !

It is a fantasy of many, but not considered by any

Good job

wife and I had a lover we shared...may not have been blood....but followed same course...we had rings we did alot together...in bed and in public...sadly wife backed out...and our lover went her way...now im sad

Something similar with a mother and daughter. That would be hot!

Things that make dreams

Good dialogue with a believable situation makes a great story. Impressive!

Excellent story. I'd love a follow-up about him actually getting Tina's virgin ass. Great quality realistic dirty talk from a set of long time lovers in this story!

Great story, hope for a continuation. I too had a similar situation with my wife and her Cousin. Oh what a great time it was, and lasted for about 5 years before she moved away due to her job. I could relate to this very well. Thanks..!

I love the softness/intimacy between the sisters. ("I pushed Tina's hair out of the way so I could see better. 'I love you,' I said.")

Such a beautiful story.

What a great story, plenty of great descriptive sex, loved how it flowed

just i can say is wonderfull and hope have a continue

Every guys dream. *****

Just a great story.

Sounds like every man's dream.

Well done. A bit 'long winded' but good.

Really enjoyed the story, but was a bit annoyed by 'I came again' every two strokes. That's not how woman's orgasms work :))

Well done. Well developed. Very caring, Very erotic. It would have been good for the end to have a lot of fucking among the three. The epilogue should have been much longer. Also, there should have been a lot of fucking between the sisters.

Thanks for a good story.

Sure would like more chapters

there should have been a lot of fucking between the sisters as well.. all 3 doing each other.. hot!!!

I don't comment very often but I wanted to commend you on a very well-written story.

More-- I wanted to encourage you to ignore some of the comments I've seen here. I usually comment anonymously but the truth is that I'm I'm a fairly notable Literotica writer as well. I only mention it because I've also had the experience of receiving comments which range from "nit-picky" to "nasty" about my writing; often over minor spelling errors in what I think are fairly well-edited pieces. I like to remind myself that the vast majority of these grouses have probably never WRITTEN anything.

My personal thoughts: the writing and editing of this story was above average, the pacing was above average (it did drag a little in the middle, with some of the journey "across country" being a little repetitive). With the wife mentioning how much she loved sucking her husband's dick in the opening paragraphs I was a little disappointed that there wasn't more oral (I thought he would get road head on the drive while the sister watched!) but you made up for it at the very end.

I thought that the finish to the story was excellent. VERY HOT. Referencing criticism that I've read on here, I do agree that the Epilogue could have been a little longer. However, I strongly disagree with much of the other criticism that you've received:

A) The idea that the pregnancies at the end ruined your story. Would I LITERALLY like to knock up my wife's sister? No. But that doesn't mean that these taboo ideas can't be erotic. I personally know someone who knocked up a woman and then married her sister. I can think of another guy who married a girl right after using her cousin as a fuck buddy (and the new wife knew all about it). So the comment which said that the double pregnancy was preposterous was incorrect.

B) that there should have been more literal incest in the story. I thought this part was PERFECT. The sisters were loving and had a sisterly relationship. I wanted to see them drift into a sharing the husband without some nonsense where they dyke out. I know that this just goes towards MY biases, but to me that would have been a turn-off. I thought you found a great balance. One sister sucking cum off her sister's finger? Hot. The husband jacking off on two sisters? Hot.Two women who are related munching pussies? Pass.

Anyway, I had no intention of leaving such a long message! But I enjoyed your story very much! I agree that there could be a follow-up. It would have to be a shorter chapter (as you couldn't write about the pursuit of the relationship as much). Or it could be-- one year later-- that a female cousin, an aunt, etc. comes to visit, finds out about the relationship, and jealously wants to join in as well.

Very well written with extremely hot and captivating build up just wished there was more!!!

Decades ago as a kid I was with my dad when he delivered product to an isolated farm in the sparsely populated areas of western Oklahoma. The couple who operated the farm were a brother and sister who had never married, but still lived where their parents had. Only there once so did not know them. But since I have sometimes wondered how far it went. No kids. I know it's different than this story, but some of the comments brought this long dead memory to life.

Some commenters contemplate how realistic. Been a lot of multiple wives or concubines (what Tina is -- unofficial wife) in other cultures. Sisters invovved? The Bible in book of Genesis relates the story of Jacob marrying sisters Leah and Rachel. It also relates a specific story (the mandrake story) showing the jealousy and rivalry that existed. Does this only work smoothly in Literotica fantasyland? I still liked it. I liked Lord of the Rings (about Hobbits) and also the Narnia Chronicles which are PURE fantasy. It's fun to discus realism. I'm not sure it matters. To me, Literotica is about fun and this story was well-written fun.

Paul in Oklahoma

Over the years, I've read probably thousands of Literotica stories. This has to be one of the hottest.

I like what Anonymous, 7-17-18, said.

Extremely well-written with lots of great dialog.

Paul in Oklahoma

Great conversations, nice build up and hot sex.

I've read pretty much everything you've ever written and while there are some stories I wasn't keen on, such as the bikers (just disliked all the characters), most have been excellent. This one is the best of the lot. It's a great idea, well written and combines really hot sex scenes with a loving plot. Definitely my favourite.

I’ve read a lot of the stories on lit and I have the honor of saying this is one of the best I’ve read. Just one suggestion add another chapter

Wow couldn't stop reading.

The best ever that I have read! You have marvelous literary skills and a wonderfully subtle expression

Wow, great story. Please add more chapters.

you didn't bother to Proof Read!!

I loved the couple from the start.

The story developed great.

This is definitely the best story I've read from u.

I felt disappointed when it's ended!

I truly hope for a another chapter with the adventures of the new formed triangle!!!

Great story of saving a sister. Told with class.

No sharing with strangers

I felt disappointed when it's ended! Its a great lead up, but now i just want more!

Shiiiiiiiit! This story is FIRE ! 5 stars

I'd like to see a follow up with this new threesome. How are they getting along?

Excellant story, would be a great start for a saga. A story with feels is a welcome change of pace around here, need more like this.

The VERY BEST COMMENTS I’ve ever seen for a story. I thought so after the first ten—and they go on endlessly. The quality of these comments = a deep tribute to you writing!

please give us more of very sexy people