All Comments on 'My Sister, the Virgin Ch. 03'

I love the interaction between brother and sister. I can't wait to see what mom & dad think about all this.

i started reading the first one and in the same breath completed all the three .. you are going good .. the story is shaping really good .. waiting for the next one .. make it soon

thank you

Excellent story! Please continue on, I'm caught up into it now and am hoping it progresses well for Cat and Riley!

please finish soon don't leave us hanging like so many other writers on this site you have a very good story going so please continue but please do not get the parents sexually involved with them that always ruins the story

Now keep it going. Oh, yeah, use your spellchecker if you need to, but make sure you read your work word by word. Both from and form are valid words which your spell checker won't point out for you.

This is really a "Great" story that you've staarted here, so any chance that you are going to continue?

So far this story is great. Not just rambling sex but soft love between siblings. Great stuff. Keep us going with more. We need to see how Mom and Dad react and how the kids keep it together.

very pissed that you are like 90% of the asshole writers on this site that get the reader hooked then fail to bring the story to a proper finish never leave the readers hanging you only drive the loyal readers away so get your lazy ass off the couch and finish it now

... who don't write stories. Their comments are worth as much as they cost to post. Keep writing!

So her family thought it was a big deal that she got accepted into community college? Anybody can go to community college. You don't get accepted there you just sign up and go. It's high school with ash trays, not a freaking university. I wish people would think before they write.

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