All Comments on 'My Sister Wives of Ephaedra'

Innovative concept for marriage! Thanks for the story.

I thought the writing was fairly proper, though the tone was a little raw. Maybe that's because casual sex was so common, easily accepted.

BTW, in "I let Jimmy peak up my skirt," the word should be peek in this usage.

There is so much more you can do with this story, so many directions and so many participants. Keep writing!

I have posted another story of sister-wives. It got categorized under incest-taboo. I suppose it's as much that as sci-fi though the different female anatomy isn't quite Earthly. I have several others in progress. And some other interesting ideas for turning sexual conventions upside down on alien worlds.