All Comments on 'My Sister's Desperation Ch. 01'

This is such a hot story! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Waiting for part 2 .

Good tale for the kinky

And that got us through Wednesday or Thursday?

Wednesday, I hope!

Introduce us to her kinky girlfriend.

Some Moron asked for the Disclaimer? Sheet.

Can't wait for part 2

Kelly knew exactly what was going on the whole time. She is now in a great position to dominate and train Andrew.

Can't wait for part two

Part two please

I need part 2

Please let part two describe them both realising how turned on by piss play they are and have them experiment with drinking from each other, ideally with some sexy friends joining in too

I not into piss play, I think this should have been posted in Fetish, the story still good if you into piss play.

Part two please

I'm usually not into piss and have even thought my husband was weird for liking it but this was beyond erotic. I need chapter two like yesterday!

Fuck her while she is pissing all over your cock..... One of the great fucks ever...

Need the next chapter desperately

Very nice story line and very well written. Thanks. I look forward to more.

You've written about one of my all-time fantasies.

Awesome start!

That's the hottest story I've ever read on here! Can't wit to keep going!

That was a sizzeling sensuous story hope there is more

Fuck...that was hot. I now want someone to piss on my hard cock

I wish i could tickle her so she lost control of her bladder too

Good premise.

But you really need an editor/proofreader. For example: you don't seem to understand that proper nouns need to begin with capital letters -- even in the middle of sentences; you wrote ONTO when you meant ON TO; FOCUSED has one S -- it's not FOCUSSED.

Four stars.