All Comments on 'My Sister's Friend Is Visiting'

sweet

Very realistic descriptions and feelings. Many young guys have had similar experiences.

You're a wonderful writer

I really liked this story - the pace was just right, the level of detail was enough to paint a good picture without boring with excessive adjectives, etc. You've got a very sensual style - and yeah, what young man hasn't had this fantasy or one very similar to it?

You can take this story in many directions if you wanted to continue it, but it's great all on its own, too!