All Comments on 'My Sister's Friends Ch. 02'

Looking forward to the next chapter.

My only complaint(?) would be that Jasmine's name got changed to Jessica, from Chapter 1 to Chapter 2. That sort of thing sends the reader back to figure out who's who - distracted me from a good read.

I screwed up! I hope I didn't also mess up Chapter 3, which has been submitted.

I appreciate your comment.

more please!

I greatly appreciated your part one. This continues the feeling and excitement of a young man(inexperieced, through no fault of his own) and four teen girls experienceing while enjoying life. Excellent story develioement, and continuity, Thank you,

All that time you have waited for has finnaly paid off. It just goes to show that good things happens to people who wait. I just hope that happends to me sonner or later.

Anyways, wonderful story. It is very inspiring. I also like your writing style because it is very descriptive. Keep up the good work and good luck :P

When did "Jasmine" change her name to "Jessica"?

I've read a few of your stories on here & you seem to have a problem keeping the names straight.

It gets a lil' disconcerting to be reading along & all of a sudden a new name pops up & no one has been added to the cast......

Other than that I like your stories......but it's something that you need to pay more attention to.

One little thing that can help in any other stories you wright. You can go into your typing program and add names to auto correct so if you only type part of the name or the wrong name it will popup to correct it so you won't have any more people pointing it out. I don't care very good stories. I am on my second set already in about a week

I have CP similar to the character in your story. I'm happy to not feel as alone in my feelings toward women. Your description is dead on. I don't need to guess what parts are true, I've lived it. girls don't mean to ignore you, they just don't even see you.