All Comments on 'My Sister's Keeper Ch. 01'

you do anything else? how long ago was this?

you must write more

...leaving people hanging like this won't bring an avalanche of high scores!

Can’t wait to read next chapter!!!!

Stick it up your fucking ass hole

Don't take the negative comments seriously .. It was a great buildup for what comes next.. I'm awaiting the next chapter.. I like to read stories that has a buildup, instead of just sex.. Please write chapter 2

Can’t wait for more

Yes, this is the kind of story I've been waiting to read! Nice build up, crazy dilemma and as much as I like reading incest stories I want to bang your gf Alisha. Red heads give me raging stiffies. A little more detail for the sister could be my only criticism. Good job Jacob! Can't wait to read the next chapter...

it was a great read, but way too early to submit it, finish it next time, no body likes a tease.

Nice continue further