All Comments on 'My Sister's Keeper Pt. 02'

Nice to read a story with a Hallmark ending

Glad you like it.

I'm glad she told him about the asshole of a step-dad and that he went anyway and beat the brake's off his ass.

I could let the creep just walk away scot-free! Thank you. : )

Hallmark right?

Ok.

Thanks.

Great little story with a great ending ... so far.

I'd like to see it expanded more and have more chapters. The writer has a great sense of how things might actually happen i think.

Hope to see more of his work in the future.

For this story. But, there are more stories listed on my profile, and more stories coming. Quite a few, in fact. Stay tuned and thanks for the nice comment.

There was only 1 story I gave a 5 star and that was 'Sister in heat'. This, I would give a 10 star if I could.

Great work. I loved reading part one and two. I was hoping Suzie and the mom would talk things over and begin a new chapter in life. Eventually to leading her to find out what they have going on and possibly ending up as a lover in this series

There were many paths to take this story down, but I wanted to keep it just about them. Thanks to everyone who gave me feedback!

But no more chapters, I think. Looks like to me, that you let Suz and Kevin ride (each other) off into the sunset at just the right point. Good epilogue where Darren leaves, Mom gets counseling, and they talk about children and genetic testing. Serious life stuff, no longer the erotica fodder. Looking foreward to reading more of your stories.

that you enjoyed my ending. I very much appreciate your comments. It seemed the best way to end the story. : )

if I become a father I really wanna fuck my daughter.

...until they take the genetic tests for possible birth anomalies and the doctor sees they share DNA. Oopsie!.

Great story, though.

... each use a different doctor? Just a possibility. Glad you liked it. Thanks! : )

It was a good story but I must say that the whole idea of her holding on to the butt plug and nighty she was abused in is a bit of a stretch. She might not have been a nympho but she WAS an emotional masochist.

Tender and loving. I'm not sure if the punishment for Darren's crime was severe

enough. Good read.

Glad you enjoyed it. Since he promised not to do anything, I thought it was a fair compromise, short of killing him or cutting his dick off. Thanks for the comment.

Enjoyed the story and will read more of your stories. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Great story, loved it.

Must look at your other stories now.

Scores a 5/5

she probably should have had some therapy ?? not easy to get through that kind of thing with no professional help ?? VERY HOT STORY !!!!!

Very hot, very erotic and well written story. Enjoyed the read. 5/5

I love happy endings, I see nothing wrong with incest, it' all in the heart

Was a bit concerned initially, but enjoyed this. Good story

Loved your story and the very detailed description of their sex and those sensations I’m horny as hell after reading this

Kisses💋wendy

Loved the story, scores 5/5 and into favourites