All Comments on 'My Sister's Proposal Ch. 02'

At the point where we find out what happened to Susan, you switched the names for a few paragraphs.

could be very interesting esp. if Donna is bi-curious.

Nice story...erotic and very exciting.

Need a chapter 2...3....4....and more

Had you proof read it before submission it would have been much better. Had Literotica read it before accepting it, the confusing mix up in a couple of places would have been spotted.

The story was, by itself, a great tale, well told.

this is the most common thing in literotica sisters are bisexual

Its my opinion that Brother should just dump Donna his girlfriend and just have Cindy and Susan as his fuckbuddies or girlfriends,and have Susan move in like Cindy did,and all 3 fuck like rabbits,since Susan is probably estranged from her family after they sided with Tom when he raped Susan.

And Susan truly deserves family who will love her and protect her,while still getting fucked wonderfully by her cousins.This story was great.

@RodismusMike, that's one option. But being this story written in 2010, we will never know.

Another option was, that Donna joined the gang, and the lived all long and happy...