All Comments on 'My Sister's Visit Ch. 02'

Fantastic job and your writing is truly erotic.

This is getting better by the page !

While in our teens my sister and I would get nude in the house whenever our folks were gone. I would get hard looking and her and she would smile. Sometimes even lick her lips. But was never as generous as the sister in the story.

The first part was nice as a warm up. This chapter was HOT! The only thing lacking is another woman and you would nail all 3 fantasies in one story. This was really well written. I hope there will be a part 3. Superb story!

That was fuckin hot, everyboys dream i think !

Nice 5*

I gave it a 5 star. I liked it alot and hope to see more.

The smoking killed the story. No wonder she and her husband split. He couldn't stand the stench and her taste. Yuk!! 1*