All Comments on 'My Sleeping Sister'

Do you want to continue the story and explain exactly what the first sister was dreaming about?

Since it's mentioned that the second sister was making a film,could the first sister be dreaming of the scenes from it?

Please try and explain clearly what happened in the story.

I also think the story needs more sex.

couldn't really get into this one, stick to "shooting with helena!"

It does need more explanation, though. Perhaps a sequel?

It doesn't depict much sex, but definitely erotic and well thought out. :)

I loved it. Suspenceful.

The point wasn't in how they reconciled, just that the door opened to that reconciliation. Possibly the dreams meant nothing more than Cassie's fears on losing her sister. Katie reached out and receiving the awaking return txt in time to not end Cassie's dream life was perhaps a foreshadowing of their revived relationship.

That was the most vividly narrated pieces I have read in here. The best most fluent writing of any author. Frankly novel worthy; I am so impressed and managed to invest myself in these characters in a really short time