by CiaoSteve
One of the best descriptions of sex I've read in a while. Turned me on like there was no tomorrow!
Unlike my theory that Ben and Dani would each have an epiphony and realize their love for each other both just treated it as sex and blackmail.Dani should have cherished getting Ben's virginity,but sadly Dani didn't give a shit about that.
And Ben actually continuing his blackmail on Dani was sad,I really wish they had changed and fell in love right there and been like the Geek and the Beauty and had both smart and beautiful babies to carry on Ben and Dani's attributes.Oh well still a decent story but could have been better.
Not bad, we need Ben to “save” his sister and make her his in every way.
Chapter 3 please
I had thought Ben was a somewhat decent guy and would have come to appreciate Dani especially since she took Ben's virginity,but his cold and callous threat to Dani after she rocked his world was just uncalled for.
Granted Dani was a Slut but judging by her reaction after her and Ben had sex that Dani genuinely seen Ben as a Great Lover and probably was eager to have sex with him more.But Ben did a complete 180 and threatened Dani to keep doing it with him,but if he had just told her he cared for her and wanted to be with her regularly Dani probably would've been more than happy to fuck her brother willingly.
All-in-all the complete mind change of Ben to become an Evil Little Brother was a real letdown,he should have planted a Big Sloppy French Kiss to Dani and told her she was the Best Sister and Lover and he would love to be with her from now on, despite if she fucked Uncle Jack and others,I am sure Dani could convince Ben to let her still fuck them and still be with her Brother.