All Comments on 'My Soccer Toy Boy'

A lovely story. (a great story if he had only been a Manchester United player).

Jack's a wuss who can't keep his mouth shut.

How could her mom boff her ex?

Simple, because at the time he was single.

No one's fault but her own that she dumped him.

Stupid girl.

Open territory is open territory.

Up the Villa

Very cool story, and nice description of the guy.

I'd love to hear how your heroine gets herself out of that pickle. It probably wouldn't be very erotic (Or could it be?) but to get out of such a situation believably sounds a real challenge.

Over to you, Ms Williams!

R.

P.s Liked the story as well ;-)

McLeish out!

Any of this autobiographical...? Just curious.

Oh to have an older woman again. I have to relive it through stories. Come seduce me lol. You tell it so well but I would have prefered a seduction since I am still shy lol

A story that draws you in. Told with an uncomplicated realism. Thank you, I enjoyed it.

would like that fucker to tear my ass and cunt apart while i got my legs on his shoulders, what a man aaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh

...what a shit ending.

1. They fucked while he was single.

2. her daughter dumped him

It's not her daughter's business.

Excellent!

I love the slow build up, the teasing, the vivid clarity you bring to the pictures you paint. The sense of frustration and lust in her mind. Also, the detail is not over done - this is proper writing. It's also super hot.

Plus I love the ending!

I hope that Amanda goes on to have many other lovers, and I look forward to reading about them and enjoy the slow, cock-hardening build up as she does.

The mother wanted what her daughter had, and lost. I feel mothers with daughters sometimes look at the offspring’s lover as her surrogate lover. I am not sure what a daughter will think or do about her boyfriend having been with her mothet when she takes him back. Learning he had sex with her mother should prevent further contact, but it may be the daughter likes to be his better choice over her mother.